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22 February 2018

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I couldn't find a text on line which provided the example of what I was looking for in a model persuasive letter. So I wrote one (and wish that i had done earlier as it was quicker)

This is a letter to the head teacher which tries to persuade them to get rid of school uniform.

It can be used as a model text to look at with the children to identify features and language.
It could be used a starting letter to be up-leveled and improved
We used it as the 'Imitate' text at the beginning of a T4W cycle

Hope you find it useful and it saves you some time.
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Reviews

4.6

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Mausiness

3 years ago
4

Had the features I needed - my main quibble is the use of "myself" when you mean "I"! Myself is so misused these days. It's a reflexive verb. "I wash myself". "My peers and I feel", not "My peers and myself feel". You wouldn't say "Myself feel". You've saved me a lot of time though! Thank you!

NicolaGundy

3 years ago
5

Exactly what I needed. Has many features of persuasive writing to be discussed with class. Edits from reviews below also noted and will be used a teaching point.

merren5

4 years ago
3

Nicely structured letter, but incorrect spelling of 'stationary'. Have changed to 'stationery'. Have also added missing date and punctuation at the end. Thank you for the free resource though - only had to make a couple of small changes.

pmtripp

5 years ago
4

Nice letter, but I have changed "Myself and my peers feel more comfortable and at ease in our own clothes" to the grammatically correct "My peers and I feel more comfortable..."

joanneastott

5 years ago
5

Thank-you, you've saved me a lot of time with this.

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