Hi Kate, brilliant idea and nice structure. However, there are a lot of small mistakes which should be changed. For example: p4 : Letzte Woche habe ich mich mit meiner Schwester gestritten, weil sie in mein Zimmer gekommen ist, und hat meinen Laptop genommen, (firstly there is no "," before "und" and secondly, the word order should be: und meinen Laptop genommen hat. I am a native speaker of German. If you want, send me a word version (not the current pdf) and I correct all the mistakes for you. All the best, Viktoria