A vivid Year 4 writing lesson on expanded noun phrases. Children build phrases with well-chosen adjectives before the noun and prepositional phrases after it, practise the comma rule, rescue an overstuffed phrase, and raid a treasure chest of ambitious prepositions. It is a ready-to-teach PowerPoint scaffold for an hour-long lesson on expanded noun phrases, ending with an atmospheric setting description of an abandoned fairground. Includes the Noun Phrase Machine game, worked examples that level up dull sentences, and a quick quiz.